tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8403605253107637264.post5466983207104042951..comments2011-07-06T15:03:54.911-07:00Comments on A Game of Hide and Seek: 000100010111001010001100101/010/1000Katehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17757628958420702097noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8403605253107637264.post-70631591847954408592011-07-06T15:03:54.911-07:002011-07-06T15:03:54.911-07:00Also, as the writers change, the style of writing ...Also, as the writers change, the style of writing does not. Only what is being said does. Everything written seems like it has been written by the same person.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8403605253107637264.post-65158405469721462522011-07-06T11:50:38.762-07:002011-07-06T11:50:38.762-07:00The breaking of canon is sometimes the path to imp...The breaking of canon is sometimes the path to improvement. The liberates taken have made the aforementioned story improbable at best. Tone down the obvious story telling, which has become increasingly unrealistic, as your tone changes. Less raw.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com